Friday, December 27, 2019

true stories

We have been working on developing a culture of storytelling in our classroom. Our unit on narrative writing began with the sharing of stories around our story oval. In the glow of a small tea light, we took turns practicing the art of oral storytelling. The telling of stories is an important part of the planning process. We all have a story to share.

 




In the midst of telling stories we studied stories. We noticed how writers show who, what, and where. We learned how we can bring our stories to life using labels, speech bubbles, and sound words. These authors and illustrators were our mentors as the children used their developing knowledge to put their stories on paper.

As their writing folders filled with stories the children began the challenging and rich process of publication. They chose one story they wanted to edit and revise to share with an audience.

We welcomed Ms. Shelley back into our classroom with a new kind of book we could build. She taught us how to construct an accordion book. The children's final drafts would live within the pages of their carefully folded and glued book. Ms. Shelley taught us how to fold the pages using mountain folds and valley folds. All of the builders used a familiar tool, a bone folder, to ensure crisp and strong folds.

 

With the children nestled on the rug they made a pattern of folds; mountain, valley, mountain, valley. We secured pages together with glue and admired how the pages could be opened like a book or stand like a sculpture.

Their first draft was chosen and the home for their stories was built. It was time to edit and revise, but first the children needed to reread their draft again, using the lens of a teacher. I invited them to develop a checklist for writing true stories.

What are the important things our true stories need to have? We compared our narrative writing checklist to our informational writing checklist from earlier this year, noticing that the lists have many of the same things!

I then made small copies of their checklist to use as a tool the following day. I modeled using a highlighter to highlight the evidence in my first draft. For example, I used connecting words like first, next, and then. I put a small check on my list and highlighted those words in my writing.

 

 

 

 


It was now time to rewrite their stories in the books they built. We rewrote one page at a time, ensuring the young writers took their time and provided careful work. Once their final pages were written in black pen, they added color as another way to bring their stories to life.

 

We read and reread and reread some more! Our books were missing something; front covers. Again we studied the stories we had been revisiting throughout the unit. We noticed titles and front cover illustrations connect to the important parts in the story. The children used sharpies and watercolor to design a front cover illustration connecting to the important parts in their stories. They wrote their title at the top and By- ________ at the bottom.

 

This process as been full of rich challenges and colorful moments. When I asked the children what we have learned about stories, they shared that everyone has a story and our stories will live forever.

On the Friday morning before break the children shared their stories with families. They carefully untied a ribbon attached to their books and opened the front cover, touching and reading the details on every page. Their stories are a gift.

 

 

As teachers and parents we can provide children with the tools and support for recording, writing and illustrating their words. But perhaps the most important things we can provide are an authentic audience and time; time to stop and listen, time to notice and ask questions, and time to celebrate the sharing of our stories with our community.

What's your story?


 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Saturday, December 14, 2019

a day so gray

This week we have connected much of our work to the story A Day So Gray. One of the characters in the story feels stuck, continuously saying how the day is so gray. Her persistent friend shares the many colors that can be found in a winter day; stomps of green and tangerine sunsets.  

Towards the end of the story the character's feelings begin to change and together both children notice the color, light, and warmth that can be found in every day. We reflected on the many ways we can fill our days with color; the color we find in the natural world and the color we create.


12-11-19

How can you fill our day with color?

I can help others see the colors in nature - ZM
I can smile - DP
I can be kind - BP
I can paint with friends - AW
I can give a hug when they need one - CB
I can take care of myself - MW
I can share art - NF
I can have an imagination - SW
I can help people feel loved - SP
I can wait and give time - CS
I can welcome people in - CM
I can be nice - BC
I can stay in the green zone - CM
I can smile - LJ

Later in the week we used a sentence from the book to practice reading punctuation and new sight words. We circled the punctuation, counted the words and spaces, and reread the sentence during morning meeting. 

The children then cut out the words and punctuation from their own sentence strip, putting the words back in order and building the sentence on their small canvas. We used our pointer power to reread the sentence again, checking to make sure the words were in the correct order. We used the exclamation point to help us read the word Look with excitement!

 

 



Using the back cover illustration from the story as our inspiration, the children painted their own (not so) gray winter day on a cardboard canvas. We noticed the colors in the illustration and how the artist used lines to create the winter day; first a yellow line, then an orange line, next a pink line and finally a purple line. Our lines mixed together, like the colors in a sky. Using lines again, we made a white line across the middle of their canvas and the children painted a snowy hill. 

Once the paint was dry we took on the role of mathematicians. 
How many trees in the illustration from the book? 6. 
How do you know? 3 on one side of the hill and 3 on the other; 3 + 3 = 6. 

Using their knowledge of shapes and lines the children drew straight lines with a colored pencil from top to bottom on a small brown rectangle. These lines were the detail for the tree bark. Then, using scissors, they cut straight lines from top to bottom. They chose their 6 trees and glued the trees to their colorful canvas. Their last step was using a white paint pen to make tiny dots for the falling snow. 

On Friday morning as they transitioned into the classroom they found pictures of their (not so) gray day next to their sentence. They cut around the circle and glued the picture above their built sentences. 

Children shared that they felt proud of their work and that all of our (not so) gray days were beautiful!

 

 

 

 

 











This one story has provided us with;

social/emotional conversations and book reflections through turn and talks and whole group shares
community connections and reflections on the powerful choices we make every day
opportunities to develop speaking and listening skills- following directions!
meaningful opportunities to use developing reading strategies
practice following print from left to right
the use of fine motor skills; working with straight lines
practice using an artist as a mentor
an opportunity to be persistent with cutting tiny, straight lines
math language; circle, rectangle, top, bottom, how many
1-to-1 matching (words and counting how many trees)

a deep sense of community; we all have an important place in our classroom and in our families, we can share feelings of color, light, and warmth on the grayest of days

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